Letter to the Editing staff of Merlin's Rest Publishing House
Dear Mr. Mupak-shah,
I recently received the edited third draft of my new novel for young adults, and although I do agree with some of the minor changes, I fail to understand why you are requesting such a drastic change in the nature of Miss Lydia Newstrom. I find her to be a fine, strong character, and have written the book to reflect those characteristics.
Just to write "She's too Gryffindor" on chapter 10 - the chapter where she goes into the burning building and saves four sheep from certain death - seems unprofessional and, in my mind, uncalled for. You ought not make assumptions about her sorting in a real school when she is obviously a fictional character NOT based on anyone in the real world.
Also, I see no reason whatsoever to change the materials of her amulet from bronze to silver. Why would she wear a silver amulet? Bronze, as you must well know, is an alloy of copper and tin and has far more conductive powers on at least two different ethers. How would she possibly use a silver amulet to call out the spirits of the Earth. Everyone knows silver is a conductor for the moon and stars.
Now, I understand that you are new to this position and you have yet to work with me, so let me just start by saying that I am not easily intimidated, and I am very strong in my opinions about certain things - creative freedom being one of them. Just because you are now in power in one of the largest Wizarding publishing companies does not give you the right to dictate throughout the entire writing process.
I will not make major structural and plot changes to my story. On that one point I remain firm. If you want a fairy-story that casts a young lady in a position of a helpless primadonna, you can find another writer. If, however, you wish to continue to work with an author who writes about bold, empowered women who respect nature, and will stand fast in the face of adversity and inequality, then you might want to allow me to continue my work.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely,
R. John Lupin
I recently received the edited third draft of my new novel for young adults, and although I do agree with some of the minor changes, I fail to understand why you are requesting such a drastic change in the nature of Miss Lydia Newstrom. I find her to be a fine, strong character, and have written the book to reflect those characteristics.
Just to write "She's too Gryffindor" on chapter 10 - the chapter where she goes into the burning building and saves four sheep from certain death - seems unprofessional and, in my mind, uncalled for. You ought not make assumptions about her sorting in a real school when she is obviously a fictional character NOT based on anyone in the real world.
Also, I see no reason whatsoever to change the materials of her amulet from bronze to silver. Why would she wear a silver amulet? Bronze, as you must well know, is an alloy of copper and tin and has far more conductive powers on at least two different ethers. How would she possibly use a silver amulet to call out the spirits of the Earth. Everyone knows silver is a conductor for the moon and stars.
Now, I understand that you are new to this position and you have yet to work with me, so let me just start by saying that I am not easily intimidated, and I am very strong in my opinions about certain things - creative freedom being one of them. Just because you are now in power in one of the largest Wizarding publishing companies does not give you the right to dictate throughout the entire writing process.
I will not make major structural and plot changes to my story. On that one point I remain firm. If you want a fairy-story that casts a young lady in a position of a helpless primadonna, you can find another writer. If, however, you wish to continue to work with an author who writes about bold, empowered women who respect nature, and will stand fast in the face of adversity and inequality, then you might want to allow me to continue my work.
Thank you for your time and consideration. Sincerely,
R. John Lupin